Eddie Richardson[DENIED]

This is my brother account.. So dont think its me.

IC Information
Date of Birth: june 27th, 1990
Name: Eddie Richardson
Current employment: None
Previous criminal record(Don't Lie): A few, Nubs was bothering and attacking me
Education(more than 100 words): Well I just moved into Los Santos, My brother Trey Kilo started a gang called Bloods. I really want to stop him and his criminal activities with his gang, I went to Los Santos University(College) and got my degree. I went there to be a police officer. But never got the chance, So im making the choice now. I went to Shooting School got a degree, And trying to get a licenses. Im a great shooter.

Why would you make a good Officer: I will be the best that everyone have seen, I would arrest anybody when theyre doing illegal things.


OOC Information
Character Level: 1 going on 2
Time zone: GMT -6
Hours online daily: 4hours a day
Other Comments: None

Education part is not 100 words or more.
And overall it's not too good of an essay.
DENIED

I'd consider taking what you can get for now... you could start him out easy and train him.
But it's up to you.